mediocre at best
mediocre at best
i dont think i even have a song thats better than mediocre
pog
Hope I end up deciding to remix this because I'd love to see what I can do with a track like this :)
I would too!
ngl the arp is a little annoying but not that bad
definitely some relaxing vibes here!
Pros:
-Drums are satisfying to listen to
-Definitely chill!
Cons:
-Hi-hat rhythm is just... weird to listen to, and not in the best way. Maybe they're just too loud.
-Song's pretty empty in general except for when that piano comes in. IDK if that's what you're going for, but... it doesn't work too well.
5/10, needs work but definitely fits the bar for lofi hiphop
WOW!... thanks you so much for adressing the cons :D it helps me alot :3
this is gonna be tough but I have faith in myself :)
Personally think the vocals should be louder but overall mastered pretty well. GJ!
You're not wrong, anyway thank you for the feedback! 😁
Mastering could use work. White noise sweeps are way too loud (imo) and the arp that seems to be the main focus is a bit too repetitive and feels a bit too static, maybe add some swing or adjust the note rhythm so it's not just the same note length over and over.
Overall, a good try at synthwave! I don't listen to the genre much so I don't know if my critiques are normal in it, however they are some things that could use improvements.
:)
this would be amazing with vocals, still really good!
American music producer with no main genre. I live in Minnesota.
Age 28, Male
Minnesota
Joined on 11/12/19